10,365 words later....

[respoftw]

The first draft of my first reverse bang fic is done! I have no idea how much editing it will need, not even gonna look at it again until tomorrow but hallleluja, I have a draft!!

Feeling much more confident about getting fic # 2 done in time now!

Comments

[melagan]

Yay!

[respoftw]

So much yay!

[otherearths_outthere]

Yay! Excellent. I’m still willing to beta if you want/have no one better 😜

[respoftw]

I’m gonna do the first edit myself, rewrite some bits and fix anything I find but I still plan on taking you up on that after that. I’ll message you when it’s ready xx

[otherearths_outthere]

I have read it through once, and made a few suggestions. I will read it again tomorrow.
I loved the story. It was well paced, everyone’s voices terrific, and the humor sublime. I hope I didn’t sound like a jerk when I commented on deployment.

[respoftw]

I can't imagine you sounding like a jerk ever! Unfortunately my internet is down this morning so not sure when I'll get a chance to look at your edits. The docs app on my phone just doesn't cut it!

Thank you for taking the time out to look at it xx

[respoftw]

I've read through your suggestions and you definitely weren't a jerk. I've reworded the paragraph :)

[mific]

IS VERY EXCITED!!!

[respoftw]

:) :)